My Family
I will never exist,
as long as my family is here,
even if I insist,
they will still help me,
My mother help me when i'm in need,
My father gives me opinion when i'm in need,
My sister do my homework when i'm in need,
My brother can't help me when i need money,
I will never exist,
as long as my family is here,
even if I insist,
they will still help me,
My mother help me when i'm in need,
My father gives me opinion when i'm in need,
My sister do my homework when i'm in need,
My brother can't help me when i need money,
2 comments:
♥♥essadoo♥♥ said...
♥♥essadoo♥♥ said...
elow..
your poem is nice,
but it would be nicer if you are going to add more stanzas and make it more meaningful..
so that the people who will visit ur blog would appreciate your poems and leave some comments..
>it's just an advice...
>it's ur choice, if you want to accept it..
enjoy your day...
bdw. don't forget to drop by and leave a comment in all the poems that I posted in my blogspot account...
take care always...
♥♥♥donessa♥♥♥
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